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Xiamen University Class Materials

Instructor: Mr. Michael Krigline, MA        Xiamen University,  Economics Dept

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Quick links:    general Movie Report format          Test-exam Preview               "American Ways" vocabulary and materials

More links:

--2012-13 vocabulary (the former "xmu-materials.htm" page)

--Fall 2013 Writing Assignment A      

 

Common abbreviations:

sth=something

sb=somebody/someone

i.e.=that is

e.g.=for example

esp=especially

ASAP=as soon as possible

RSVP=please reply/respond (from French)

BrE=British English

AmE=American English

adj=adjective

 

THIS PAGE IS ALWAYS UNDER CONSTRUCTION!

In class, I'll tell you what you need for our assignments and tests. Sometimes you can get more information here, or on other on-line pages.

During the fall term, \americanways.htm had the same vocabulary as \xmu-materials.htm; but the two pages are now different.

*English punctuation marks (you should know all of these)

’ apostrophe; friends, friend’s    

* asterisk or star

(    )  (AmE) parenthesis, parentheses

         (BrE) rounded brackets   

[   ] (AmE) brackets    (BrE) square brackets

: colon              

; semi-colon                             

! exclamation point

. period

, comma           

/ slash              

? question mark

“      ” quotation marks  

‘   ’ (AmE) single quotation marks

… ellipsis                     

- hyphen                      

-- (or –) dash

_ underscore

underline (a line under text for emphasis)

italics (text in this format for emphasis)

Notes from "Basic Writing" lectures/materials (fall 2013)

 

1. Why is an implication important to academic writing?
A good implication shows how your topic is relevant, so it is a great way to end an academic paragraph or essay.

2. What should a topic sentence do and what shouldn’t it have?
A topic sentence is an interesting sentence that gets the reader’s attention and introduces the topic of a paragraph; it should give the reader an outline of the paragraph’s main support points (and not have vague or colloquial expressions)

 

(Optional) You’ll find more advice about writing essays on line:
http://www.krigline.com.cn/ts_con.htm
http://www.krigline.com.cn/essays_advice.htm
http://www.krigline.com.cn/write_essays.htm
http://www.krigline.com.cn/essays.htm (sample essays)
 

Writing Assignment A (fall 2013)

 

Topic: describe something with two similar parts or aspects: e.g., two positive aspects of campus life, two nice features of a city you are familiar with, or two related parts of the Chinese education/law system. You can choose just about any topic, as long as the two parts are similar/related.

You will do this assignment with your new partner; two people, one paper. Assignment A is a typed outline for a 4-paragraph essay. For the “Introduction”, give me a grammatically complete “Thesis Statement” (which will be the first paragraph’s last sentence); but also give me some idea of what will lead to it. “Some idea” does NOT mean complete sentences. This is supposed to be an outline. “Notes” would be something like this: advanced technology and machines (generally no more than 5-7 words).

Then write out the topic sentence for each of the two support paragraphs, followed by an outline for those paragraphs.

DO NOT give me any kind of conclusion.

You’ll write only three grammatically correct sentences; everything else will be “notes.”

 

NOTE: If I discover that your essay contains plagiarism, it will get a zero (for both students). You also lose the privilege of "doing it over" or revising it. This will also badly affect other aspects of your semester grade. Therefore, do not plagiarize!!

 

Your paper must be typed and double-spaced. Note: You should be able to put this on ONE page. If you have trouble, don't "double space" the "notes about support" sections.

It will look like this:

 

English/Pinyin Name: Jim Ming-dao     ID:1234567     Class: JR1

English/Pinyin Name: Bill Li                 ID: 1234566

 

Introduction:

     1a. notes about something (e.g., advanced technology and machines)

     1b. something (e.g., innovative ideas)

     1c. Thesis statement: (This is a grammatically correct sentence, with correct punctuation.)

Body:

     2a. Topic Sentence about aspect 1: (This is a grammatically correct sentence, with correct punctuation.)

     2b. notes about support

     2c. notes about support

     2d...

     3a. Topic Sentence about aspect 2: (This is a grammatically correct sentence, with correct punctuation.)
3b. notes about support
3c. notes about support

      3d...

Conclusion: (DO NOT do this part)

Basic Writing vocabulary (from Successful Writing for the Real World)

*to persuade: [vt] convince; cause somebody to do something by reasoning {1}

to boil down: [vti] to give soup a stronger flavor by reducing the water content while cooking; to make information clearer by leaving out unnecessary things {1}

blasphemy: [u&c] disrespectful talk about sacred/holy things {1}

obscenity: [u&c] language that is sexually offensive {1}

writer: [c] person who writes; an author {1}

*editor: [c] person responsible for the contents of a publication {1}

*articles: [c] things written about a particular subject for a newspaper or magazine; GRAMMAR: the words a, an, and the, used to mark nouns, i.e., to show that a noun is to follow and to provide a little information about that noun. “The” is called a definite article; “a/an” are indefinite articles. {1}

review: [c] an informed opinion, written to influence the reader’s choice or appreciation of something; (AmE [vti]) to look again at something you have studied (British equivalent: revise) {1}

*topic sentence: [c] an interesting sentence that gets the reader’s attention and introduces the topic of a paragraph {1}

*implication: [c] something you believe to be demonstrated by a particular situation or set of facts: e.g., if your essay states that campus trees act like soldiers (defending, protecting, giving…), then (by implication) we should respect the trees like we respect soldiers, or (by implication) students should feel safer because of the trees. {1}

*vague: (adj) unclear because of a lack of details or because a specific description is not available {1}

*colloquial: (adj) language or words that are informal, and that are usually only used in spoken communication (口语) {1}

title: [c] a short name that identifies a book, article, essay, movie, etc.; a word that (usually) comes before someone’s family name to show position, profession or respect (e.g., Dr., Mrs., Prof.) {1}

*lean: (adj) without fat or waste; thin—usually in a healthy sense {1}

*double-space: [vti] to type or write on every other line, allowing room above your text for hand-written corrections {1}

to hand in (or turn in): [vt] to give an assignment to a teacher (or sometimes a boss, official, etc.) {1}

to turn in (see hand in)

*wordy/wordiness: using more words than necessary when a more concise term, phrase or grammatical structure is possible {1}

Chinglish: an informal term (it’s not an official word) that refers to an incorrect mixture of the Chinese and English languages; producing Chinglish expressions is a natural part of the process of learning English {1}

due date: [c] the time or date on which something is expected (especially rent payments, homework assignments, or the birth of a baby); “What are their due dates?” is the same as “When are they due?” {1}

*plagiarism (to plagiarize): [u] presenting someone else’s artistic or literary work as if it were one’s own {2}

*quotation (direct quotation/quote): [c] writing that tells what someone says in that person’s own words; quotations are placed inside quotation marks

     (“ ”), also called inverted commas in British English {2}

documentation: [u] the practice of adding notes to a piece of writing in order to reveal the source of your information (the verb form [vt] would be to document; also see footnote) {2}

to document (see documentation)

automatic: (adj) done without thinking about an action; an automatic machine works without a person’s help {2}

intellectual property (IP): [u&c] creative works that can be protected by copyright or other legal means, and which can often be easily copied illegally (such as software discs, published material, essays written by other students, or music/movie discs) {2}

tarnished: [n, adj, vti] metal (like silver) that has lost its color and brightness (or the process of becoming like this); a reputation/record/etc., that has become worse in the eyes of others (the opposite of a shining reputation) {2}

*to paraphrase: [vt] to express in a shorter or clearer way what someone has said or written {2}

*footnote: [c] a note at the bottom of a page of writing that offers an explanation or reference information (an endnote is a similar note placed at the end of a chapter instead) {2}

endnote (see footnote)

*ellipsis: a punctuation mark (…) used to show that something is missing from a sentence (especially a quotation) {2}

*to emphasize (-ise BrE): [vt] to give additional importance to something (the noun form is “to give emphasis”) {2}

emphasis (see emphasize and emphatic) {2}

*idiom: [c] a fixed group of words with a different meaning from the meanings of its words {2}

in which case: [also “in this case”, “in some cases”, etc.] (case is [c], usually singular) “if this happens”; an idiomatic expression that refers to a particular situation, example or circumstance {2}

*optional: (adj) indicating a choice; not required, but acceptable or possible {2}

to attribute: [vt] to give credit to someone for writing or creating something {2}

*thesis statement: [c] (sometimes abbreviated thesis, esp. AmE) the topic sentence of an academic paper’s introduction (usually the final sentence), which concisely previews the main argument or content of the essay {4}

*thesis: [c, theses] (chapter 4) an idea or opinion about something you are presenting in a formal way; short for “thesis statement,” referring to the main idea of your paper; (chapter 14) long piece of writing about a particular academic subject, written as part of a university degree program {4}{14}

spew: [vti] to flow out in large quantities, generally in a negative sense (spew must be followed by a preposition) {4}

*sound: (adj) sensible; based on valid reasoning or principles; healthy {4}

*subtle: (adj) say something in an indirect (and sometimes clever) way; to understand a subtle statement you must pay attention {4}

prone: (adj) likely (to do), especially something bad or harmful {4}

*intriguing: (adj) interesting because it is strange, mysterious or unexpected {4}

*provocative: (adj) something that provokes a response, i.e., will make people angry/excited or create a lot of discussion {4}

query: [c] a question asked in order to get information or check that something is true {4}

rhetorical question: [c] a question asked for effect—no direct answer is expected {4}

*parenthesis: [c, parentheses] (AmE) a form of punctuation, namely a pair of moon-shaped signs put around words or symbols to show extra information: ( ); called rounded brackets or brackets in BrE {4}

brackets (see parenthesis)

rounded brackets (see parenthesis)

*bibliography: [c, bibliographies] a list of books and articles (especially those you consulted) on a particular subject, appearing at the end of a book or paper {4}

superscript: [u&c, adj] a letter or number written slightly above (and often slightly smaller than) a normal line of type: e.g., a footnote reference number {4}

*defaults (or default settings): the options automatically chosen by a computer (e.g., font size and style), unless the user selects something different {4}

*cut and paste: a common action on a computer, where the user deletes text (ctrl+x) from one place and inserts it (ctrl+v) in another place {4}

block quote: [c] a direct quotation that is longer than one sentence, and which is printed with wider margins than its surrounding text; block quotes do not need quotation marks {4}

brackets: [c] (AmE) a form of punctuation, namely a pair of square signs put around words or symbols to show extra information: [ ]; called square brackets in BrE; in BrE, brackets are this symbol: ( ) {4}

reputable: (adj) having a good reputation; known to be true, believable, or reliable (e.g., as a source of information) {4}

  

Movie Report Format

 (Note that the Movie Report for Unstoppable has a different format. Click here.)

 

       Work with your partner to complete this report. You two will create ONE paper together, and get one grade, so be sure both of you are satisfied with the answers/grammar/etc. (Each section has two parts; I encourage each partner to do "half" and then help your partner edit everything. After you write it, you can also ask other friends to carefully check grammar/spelling/etc. I will mark this thoroughly! I may also require a revision.)

       Use your own words, not something from the "movie study guide" or Internet. If I find any part of your work on line (or word-for-word on another student's paper), the whole assignment will get a zero.

       It must be typed and double-spaced, using a 12-point Arial or Times New Roman font.

       Keep your answers simple; each item needs only about three sentences (see the sample). FILL your page, but do NOT use more than one page--if the work goes on to a second page, EDIT your work better.

       Put your names and other information at the top, EXACTLY like you see it at the top of the example.

       If you do not follow these directions, I may ask you to fix it before giving it to me, which means it will be penalized for being late.
       [Note: we normally talk about movies using past tense verbs. Example: Fievel fell overboard (not "Fievel falls..."); I liked the rally in the park (not "I like...").]

 

Your movie report will have three parts:

 

1. Describe two main characters. Each character gets two or three sentences, telling me the following information. Do not simply give me a physical description. (See the sample below.)

(1a) a simple description [NAME was a young man (old woman, etc.) who...--then use an interesting verb like wants/needs/hates/dreams...); (1b) tell me about his/her character or personality; (1c) why is he/she important to the story?

2. Describe (very simply) two major problems or issues, and tell how the problem/issue was resolved.

3. Tell me about your favorite part. (Each partner will write two to four sentences)

 

See the sample below (which is double-spaced, using a 12-point Times New Roman Font).

Unlike the sample below, I expect students to fill one page while doing this report.

To see how I mark Movie Reports, click here to go to my "correction key" page.

 

The teacher will tell you the DUE date. Remember that "late" work gets a BIG penalty (see the "Welcome" sheet). "Main characters" are listed on the "movie study guide".

 

 

 

 

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